Citation
Xie, Xiao
(2024)
Peer feedback effects on the accuracy of peer assessment of ESL argumentative writing.
Doctoral thesis, Universiti Putra Malaysia.
Abstract
Evaluative judgement, the ability to assess one’s work and others’, is crucial
for students in their academic and professional journeys. However, current
feedback and assessment practices have faced criticism for being
unidirectional, overly focused on content and tasks, and passively involving
students. To address these concerns, this study proposes reevaluating and
redesigning assessment-related activities, especially in terms of the hybrid
mode of peer feedback and peer assessment. Peer feedback is a qualitatively
ungraded process providing comments and suggestions, and peer
assessment primarily focuses on quantitatively assigning scores. While peer
feedback’s relationship with writing performance has been widely studied, the
impact of different roles (feedback providers and receivers) in peer feedback
on learners’ evaluative judgement about argumentative writing has received
little attention. Similarly, peer assessment accuracy in higher education is
studied for various reasons, and inaccurate peer assessment ratings may
unveil ineffective practices and student bias.
A quasi-experimental design was used to test the impact of different feedback
roles on the accuracy of peer assessment. During the five-week intervention,
24 Malaysian undergraduates from a local higher education institution, were
assigned into three groups (feedback providers, receivers, and outsiders). A
comparison was made between the assessments given by three expert raters
and peer raters using the Rasch Partial Credit Model (PCM) to evaluate the
accuracy of peer assessment. In addition, the qualitative results were obtained
through thematic analysis, scrutinising participants’ reflection after each round
of peer assessment, as well as open-ended surveys embedded before and
after the longitudinal intervention, which enables the researcher to understand
the participants’ subjective experiences and perceptions.
The quantitative findings indicate that feedback receivers tended to provide
the most accurate scores, closely followed by feedback providers, suggesting
that those who receive feedback might be more adept at applying evaluative
judgement when assessing their peers’ essays. Moreover, the Malaysian
students participating in the study displayed a heightened awareness and
recognition of the significance of Relevance and Adequacy of Content (RAC)
in their argumentative essay writing. Furthermore, the study discovered a
positive correlation between the writing quality of essays and the accuracy of
peer assessment. Qualitative results show the distinctions between the scores
and reflections provided by peer raters and expert raters. Moreover, the preand
post-intervention survey data were analysed from the perspective of peer
feedback orientation, unveiling the participants’ self-perception regarding
utility, accountability, social awareness, and self-efficacy.
In conclusion, the quantitative findings have tested relevant theories within the
context of hybrid peer feedback and peer assessment settings, while the
qualitative data have revealed the discrepancies between the peer raters and
expert raters, as well as the participants’ openness towards the peer feedback
and peer assessment. From a practical standpoint, the hybrid mode of peer
feedback and peer assessment has the potential to enhance student
evaluative judgement, optimise writing experiences, and equip students with
valuable skills to become good writers.
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| Item Type: |
Thesis
(Doctoral)
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| Subject: |
Peer review of writing (Educational method) |
| Subject: |
English language - Study and teaching - Foreign speakers |
| Call Number: |
FBMK 2024 38 |
| Chairman Supervisor: |
Assoc. Prof. Vahid Nimehchisalem Hossein, PhD |
| Divisions: |
Faculty of Modern Language and Communication |
| Keywords: |
Argumentative writing; Evaluative judgement; Peer assessment; Peer feedback. |
| Depositing User: |
Ms. Rohana Alias
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| Date Deposited: |
30 Mar 2026 02:37 |
| Last Modified: |
30 Mar 2026 02:37 |
| URI: |
http://psasir.upm.edu.my/id/eprint/123891 |
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